The article offers criticism of the poem "KoKo," by David McGimpsey. Kisa Macdonald provides a critical interpretation on the relationship between co-workers which the poem depicts. She is critical on the employment law and the power of employer-employee relationship. Meanwhile, Thomas Young, considers the poem as an animated and like graffiti. He relates that he liked the poem the first time he read it, however, his likeness of reading it became less thereafter.